tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post2401373302041900984..comments2023-10-26T22:10:24.739+05:30Comments on MOONLIGHT AND DREAMZ: for my unborn children ... Celestial Dreamzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-83784218933940400302013-05-14T04:58:25.017+05:302013-05-14T04:58:25.017+05:30This is truly beautiful. I understand, having lost...This is truly beautiful. I understand, having lost children and then unable to have children.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-91188711358125007222013-05-13T11:12:05.655+05:302013-05-13T11:12:05.655+05:30You have so perfectly captured the longing of a wo...You have so perfectly captured the longing of a woman for a child. Very beautiful, my friend. So poignant.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-21100621847283305832013-05-13T08:19:16.958+05:302013-05-13T08:19:16.958+05:30 I love the color you work into the poem - very ha... I love the color you work into the poem - very hauntingly sad and yet strangely beautiful - i also love how it moves in and out of reality.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-36658200519359275872013-05-13T01:07:01.293+05:302013-05-13T01:07:01.293+05:30Wonderful to read Moon, a delightful piece full of...Wonderful to read Moon, a delightful piece full of your magical imagery, very emotive never tire of reading this one. Well done dear lady :)Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-4373573115440183622013-05-11T12:37:51.329+05:302013-05-11T12:37:51.329+05:30There are some secrets, some mysteries that only a...There are some secrets, some mysteries that only a mother can hold just like fathers hold the fortress deepshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15296902414799985603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-24453461059784049332013-05-10T19:41:02.553+05:302013-05-10T19:41:02.553+05:30Oh how deeply moving...this has touched my heart s...Oh how deeply moving...this has touched my heart so profoundly.<br />I have been here too...Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-29231111381732175922013-05-10T02:49:24.397+05:302013-05-10T02:49:24.397+05:30Wonderful, so sincere and one can feel the yearnin...Wonderful, so sincere and one can feel the yearning in your words.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-41824961474544781872013-05-09T23:14:40.548+05:302013-05-09T23:14:40.548+05:30you made me cry...smiles...i have friends that hav...you made me cry...smiles...i have friends that have tried forever to have kids...one was rewarded not too long ago...but deep feeling in this one...particularly...<br /><br /> I colour your apples<br />Name your dolls<br />Sing you lullabies.<br />When the night becomes a blue-black bruise<br />I look for youBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-85383054290006186322013-05-09T22:41:07.189+05:302013-05-09T22:41:07.189+05:30Very powerful poem...could be the longings of one ...Very powerful poem...could be the longings of one who can't conceive, or one who has lost pregnancies. I found it to be quite poignant.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-33525717509439274832013-05-09T19:17:19.715+05:302013-05-09T19:17:19.715+05:30Disclaimer : It's just my fancy, my imaginatio...Disclaimer : It's just my fancy, my imagination, my longing :-) ... not the reality.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-37565125728124684042013-05-09T18:32:47.581+05:302013-05-09T18:32:47.581+05:30I understand this yearning, this waiting, this won...I understand this yearning, this waiting, this wondering what they will be like. A very strong and honest poem. Blessings to you.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-68245262174480395482013-05-09T10:01:56.508+05:302013-05-09T10:01:56.508+05:30So cute and filled with deep emotions....lucky chi...So cute and filled with deep emotions....lucky children i guess!!!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com