tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post5370754399044431697..comments2023-10-26T22:10:24.739+05:30Comments on MOONLIGHT AND DREAMZ: YOU and I ....Celestial Dreamzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-19971927505598684162012-02-14T16:25:54.587+05:302012-02-14T16:25:54.587+05:30I don't recall ever reading this one. It is yo...I don't recall ever reading this one. It is you though. Lucky be the I.<br /><br />Happy Valentine's day my dear Doctor.<br />:)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-63634951705650083992011-02-13T12:55:22.739+05:302011-02-13T12:55:22.739+05:30thank you moondustwriter, Ruth, karlaspoetry, Clau...thank you moondustwriter, Ruth, karlaspoetry, Claudia, Jen.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-79393349705247746372011-02-13T01:45:47.624+05:302011-02-13T01:45:47.624+05:30numerous intense, original lines in this poem-- yo...numerous intense, original lines in this poem-- you need to write "sung" instead of sang in that one line...great job. xxJenne'Jenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-17218202753940976542011-02-13T00:45:08.144+05:302011-02-13T00:45:08.144+05:30wow - this was fresh, surprising, sensual and star...wow - this was fresh, surprising, sensual and starlit...beautifulClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-56396343719844261352011-02-12T18:31:54.941+05:302011-02-12T18:31:54.941+05:30Beautiful. The imagery is very well-crafted.Beautiful. The imagery is very well-crafted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-62002612801784222572011-02-12T17:12:07.330+05:302011-02-12T17:12:07.330+05:30So sensually you convey the way lovers complete ea...So sensually you convey the way lovers complete each other, become one, and create something utterly new. Beautiful.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-22397117165749325532011-02-12T13:54:27.274+05:302011-02-12T13:54:27.274+05:30It is beautiful and an acceptance of love. you ar...It is beautiful and an acceptance of love. you are whatever...<br />They form into one not forged but pliable<br /><br />thanks so for sharing with One Stopmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-70142004813518844622010-08-25T22:40:11.697+05:302010-08-25T22:40:11.697+05:30thank you for the read Manas ...thank you for the read Manas ...Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-69357433406517286062010-06-14T17:08:53.230+05:302010-06-14T17:08:53.230+05:30good one
cry from hills
tow a gash
shove a slash
...good one <br />cry from hills<br />tow a gash<br />shove a slash<br />timid smoke<br />i liked these expressions<br />luv youmanasnoreply@blogger.com