tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post7509095862308200685..comments2023-10-26T22:10:24.739+05:30Comments on MOONLIGHT AND DREAMZ: waiting ...Celestial Dreamzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-11614620536975034922013-04-15T17:31:06.582+05:302013-04-15T17:31:06.582+05:30The woman has unconditional love...that is why she...The woman has unconditional love...that is why she keeps on waiting..........lovely poem:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-9685438189115182302013-04-05T00:09:43.056+05:302013-04-05T00:09:43.056+05:30*takes a bow* what a poem! what a story! what an i...*takes a bow* what a poem! what a story! what an image it paints!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-85652138396055772432013-03-27T03:41:33.370+05:302013-03-27T03:41:33.370+05:30Time to wait and time to go! The waiting can be ex...Time to wait and time to go! The waiting can be exhaustive but go fleetingly away for some occasions. Nicely Dr Baishali!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-65282146725326116902013-03-25T10:02:48.993+05:302013-03-25T10:02:48.993+05:30Time to move on!! very well put...Time to move on!! very well put...TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-33997812617812226702013-03-25T05:19:45.384+05:302013-03-25T05:19:45.384+05:30Never wait. It will quickly give you the answer y...Never wait. It will quickly give you the answer you need to know . booguloohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12608900652242111334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-44365158118314822452013-03-25T03:28:28.945+05:302013-03-25T03:28:28.945+05:30The insomniac night is seeping into the breath of ...The insomniac night is seeping into the breath of the trees,/the insomniac night is licking the roof,/<br />there’s a strange restlessness in nearby skyscrapers,/night is swallowing the shadows. Very powerful imagery... and I am wondering over your opening question... how long do you wait? Until your heart tells you to stop I suppose...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10392855237259808500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-4994620039685812282013-03-25T00:52:23.695+05:302013-03-25T00:52:23.695+05:30I love your writing. I am following you, and wish ...I love your writing. I am following you, and wish I could subscribe by email.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-32393541153046023042013-03-24T23:49:37.931+05:302013-03-24T23:49:37.931+05:30Oh my God, this is so so good! The insomniac night...Oh my God, this is so so good! The insomniac night - wow. And especially the culminating lines: see the day ... left behind fell asleep waiting for you. LOVED this poem!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-62930511588336265792013-03-24T18:35:20.721+05:302013-03-24T18:35:20.721+05:30I love this! There is such drama created in contr...I love this! There is such drama created in contrast with the image, and your particular twist had me hoping for another outcome. The last line is the emotional clincher! R. Burnett Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08743367086298298786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-89295487396891048522013-03-24T12:52:35.788+05:302013-03-24T12:52:35.788+05:30'The insomniac night is seeping into the breat...'The insomniac night is seeping into the breath of the trees,'...wow, love that. This piece reminds me of the segment in the Song of Solomon where the Shulamite is searching for her groom. Lovely writing!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-72612898446528579422013-03-22T21:18:48.083+05:302013-03-22T21:18:48.083+05:30Verily Poignant and Melancholic..
Well Penned wit...Verily Poignant and Melancholic..<br /><br />Well Penned with Imagery of The Ambiance,Correlating Realms of Night,Street,etc haunting in its wrenching pain for The Woman. The Time and Space is really apt and they Make The Impact of The Cosmic Loneliness,The Waiting,The Pining,The Pain ,The Loss felt by The Female Human..<br /><br />Now<br /><br />Woman! Apt again.<br /><br />IMO Its a Powerful Way to address a Female Human. <br /><br />All Together, Exquisite & Beautiful.<br /><br /><br />Yet <br /><br /><br />for All Its Comely Melancholic Darkness in The Write and The Impact there of, Counting in and countering, I would say <br /><br /><br />Behold The One, The Advent is here again ..:) <br /><br />and hence, Arise and Shine,<br />for The Light has come !! <br /><br />and Sleep in a Slumber as The Prince of Peace & Solace has finally Manifested again casting of All Insomnia,leading to The Power of Peace..:)<br /><br /><br /><br />Allow Me, this "Artful Blabber" :D<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-8080872438110339822013-03-22T19:36:15.769+05:302013-03-22T19:36:15.769+05:30That's a powerful piece!! It conveys a poignan...That's a powerful piece!! It conveys a poignant message in the end...waiting, ah..the wait can get frustrating--:((<br />'insomniac night'-loved that phrase! Beautiful ...Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-77117930175208810952013-03-21T10:41:18.870+05:302013-03-21T10:41:18.870+05:30Such en energetic, romantic dusk
Can anyone go bac...Such en energetic, romantic dusk<br />Can anyone go back to bed<br />Shutting the awaiting eyes?<br />deepshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15296902414799985603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-60462955703119537182013-03-21T05:46:17.046+05:302013-03-21T05:46:17.046+05:30How long do you wait... I love your voice in this,...How long do you wait... I love your voice in this, beautiful my dear.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-73914796117900117472013-03-21T01:50:14.912+05:302013-03-21T01:50:14.912+05:30Oh Moon this is wonderful indeed! You outdo yourse...Oh Moon this is wonderful indeed! You outdo yourself each time with your superb imagery! An outstanding creation dear lady:) Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-90482463211065010002013-03-21T00:29:06.922+05:302013-03-21T00:29:06.922+05:30Beautiful. The ending is exceptional. Picturing th...Beautiful. The ending is exceptional. Picturing the day falling asleep waiting. Really demonstrates how long she waited. This poem has its sadness. Waiting for someone who never comes.....poignant, well penned. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-34807735814113758342013-03-20T21:36:54.151+05:302013-03-20T21:36:54.151+05:30Oh, you have created some powerful lines, here... ...Oh, you have created some powerful lines, here... night swallowing signboards, etc. ... licking the roof... your message to the woman is made more effective by your well-wrought imagery. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-40844114237421291642013-03-20T21:15:00.443+05:302013-03-20T21:15:00.443+05:30Definitely like "insomniac night"!!! and...Definitely like "insomniac night"!!! and "night is swallowing the shadows". <br /><br />Turning around in the culvert to see the day left behind - so day waiting night, night waiting day, woman, man, the swirl. Whew!!!<br /><br />(I got the title this time) :)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-516578561901642909.post-86681924364553597572013-03-20T21:06:59.381+05:302013-03-20T21:06:59.381+05:30how long do you wait....
not an easy question to a...how long do you wait....<br />not an easy question to answer...i guess it depends on who you wait for...and if the hope we have that they will come back is founded...i think that some dont understand our faith in waiting at times...but also the flip, sometimes people dont want to see the cause as hopeless so we fool ourselves as well...<br /><br />like the vividness of which you paint the streets...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com