sobs and wounds
from beneath the rubbles and soot,
piled up death,
crisped away flesh,
the human ness in us
now afraid to look up
into destiny’s mocking eyes;
I hold sadness in my palm
like a handful of gravels;
fingers paining to crumple and
But then, I know
in this hate and fear
we will re create our Earth.
All of us,
we amputee limbs,
we all gang up
to give birth to another beginning
from the middle.
Let us fill ourselves with courage
and name it survival.
Now we would be able to look up
A flow of sadness, affliction to encouragement that ends.. A smooth flow of emotions and beliefs.. :)
The prefect line of all I love best is, ... let us fill ourselves with courage and name it survival...' yes, that is so true..
My first time here and well, decided to follow your blog..
Here is mine for the rally and hope my blog will interest as well, hope to see your follow too.. :)
oh i just loved the flow..its basic and yet powerful...
I loved the flow, the message and particularly the way you ended was awesome.. SmileS.. here is my rally post, that's how life is
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Thanks for a great read.
wow! stong and powerful images that draw up in the minds eye.
Yes, a beautiful message.
So sad but it empowers in the end. Here's to surviving, living, and loving :)
It takes courage and a keen sense of understanding to confront our Destiny time and again. Well said, I liked the flow:)
A powerful message. Sad but optimistic about the future. Good job.
Nice post :)
This is a well thoughtout poem..well done..
meaningful and so true..LOVED IT !
aptly written and beautiful too. :)
A fantastic write, deep and each word counts, I thoroughly enjoyed the read
best wishes fro the day...
visit poets who were here on which you did not initially hit..
very bold- i like the way you think of this as a sojourn to a better life.. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/wedged/
Very beautiful, well timed and depths of empathy shown.
And I'm sure that Earth will be created again. Nice, it starts with pathos and ends in optimism.
a hopeful ending, and its needed. the hope is what can make us alive again even after Nature tries to end it. lovely thoughts!
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There is real depth in your words. I really enjoyed it.
wow...sadnes with hope...that we will band together and birth the next...great write...
Thanks to everyone for your encouragement.
great blend of emotions and language
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