posted for http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.com/ - notebook
posted for http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2011/09/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-67.html
posted for http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/
I humbly accept from poets Rally --------
I nominate 'OLD RAVEN'
18 comments:
You and your book of poems should hold your head up high...you write beautifully.
Another masterpiece dear lady. I love you imagery and I am probably starting to sound like a stuck record now but you are a brilliant writer :)
:) wonderful piece of words...! again..!
tc...!
Excellent piece. I love the first para.
very moving and powerful poem. Hold your head high and keep writing. Well done.
Melanie
nice...i have notebooks i have filled, some good, some thoughts...i think in the end they should hold their head high if you nothing else they were penned from a heart...and your s def should...smiles.
have a lovely weekend!
Loved what has been squeezed in the pages of your notebook!! Keep filling her up!!
This is beautiful piece of writing:)
I know about long bumpy years! :)
And "rakeless dreams" is a very interesting pairing. I am picturing a huge rake in the sky that cannot capture, let alone tame all the dreams that fly away on winds of their own impish desire.
love it,
your words vibrate.
nice one baishali.. great take! my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/
Beautifully written...a locket, worn close to your heart and opened in the silence of passion...
those "dizzying moments
still lingering ..."
and indeed they "lay squeezed.
hanging in the sphere of barbed memories like frozen raindrops..."
(I love the phraseology here!)
So beautifully written Moon! You are an inspiration.
Congrats on your award and love your blog. this is a true masterpiece and your writing is such a pleasure to come and read. Thanks for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-972
Absolutely beautifully written! You shine. I love the strength and hopefulness in your words.
Wonderful writing. You have a book filled with wondrous things!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/
fabulous.
thanks for sharing,
something about frozen raindrops i like very much. great piece.
C D,
Journey through thick and thin while struggling to establish as poetess told so well. I am sure now you will always hold your head and chin up.
Take care
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