Monday, October 24, 2011

soil...

www.google.com/ oldtrunk/

14 comments:

Adura Ojo said...

Thanks to you, Dreamz, I'll never look at soil in the same way again!:) Brilliantly written. Love the surprise at the end too...dead bodies.

Mary said...

So much depth to soil, isn't there? The ending surprised me, but oh so true!

suvaiba said...

wow, i never though someone can write a post/poem on soil..!
amazing
and the last line makes me pensive..! :))

Morning said...

unique on earth.
thanks for sharing.

Rose said...

Ah, Celest, you never ever cease to amaze me! I love everything especially the sunrays filling the corners and crevices the smiling seeds and a whole garden carelessly kept. Brilliant poem with a nice twist to it - great!

Andy said...

Hello.
WoW! You got me with that twist at the end!

Awesome, Baishali...just awesome!

Thanks for sharing.

Brian Miller said...

hopefully you have many a year before your bones need to join it...nice imagery on the old trunk...my grandmother used to have a few we would dig through in her attic for treasure...tying it to the soil, to the land gives a sense of home as well...

ayala said...

Soil is like a huge antique trunk...my friend, this is creative and strong. Great lines.

JANU said...

WOW! very creative.

Vivek said...

Well written. Soil indeed deals with the dead far better than we do :)

Beautiful Mind said...

Your words have the soul power ! They bubble with life & stir the soul ! Very meaningful thots & written with rhythm & flow !

Percy @dreamhopewrite said...

creative write. such interesting thoughts have come from the topic of soil. nice.

The Unknowngnome said...

The perfect coffin.

You've outdone yourself with this one. You've brought a smile to my face my friend. :)

Jack said...

C D,

Read 3 poems now. Misguided so rightly tells how we are the ones to be blamed for chaos created for the sake of own cults. Meditation rightly points our helplessness to focus on right issues. This one again is so factual.

Take care

PS : No visit for long time?