Welcome to my world of dreams where imagination and reality, fancy and truth, laughter and tears move hand in hand. I will let you have a glimpse at the share of my own sky, sometimes sunshine bright, and sometimes with rainstorm.
I will take you to memories that are like a serene glow of moonlight, a whisper of mountain breeze, and a rushing gushing brook.
Ah, Celest, you never ever cease to amaze me! I love everything especially the sunrays filling the corners and crevices the smiling seeds and a whole garden carelessly kept. Brilliant poem with a nice twist to it - great!
hopefully you have many a year before your bones need to join it...nice imagery on the old trunk...my grandmother used to have a few we would dig through in her attic for treasure...tying it to the soil, to the land gives a sense of home as well...
Read 3 poems now. Misguided so rightly tells how we are the ones to be blamed for chaos created for the sake of own cults. Meditation rightly points our helplessness to focus on right issues. This one again is so factual.
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Thanks to you, Dreamz, I'll never look at soil in the same way again!:) Brilliantly written. Love the surprise at the end too...dead bodies.
So much depth to soil, isn't there? The ending surprised me, but oh so true!
wow, i never though someone can write a post/poem on soil..!
amazing
and the last line makes me pensive..! :))
unique on earth.
thanks for sharing.
Ah, Celest, you never ever cease to amaze me! I love everything especially the sunrays filling the corners and crevices the smiling seeds and a whole garden carelessly kept. Brilliant poem with a nice twist to it - great!
Hello.
WoW! You got me with that twist at the end!
Awesome, Baishali...just awesome!
Thanks for sharing.
hopefully you have many a year before your bones need to join it...nice imagery on the old trunk...my grandmother used to have a few we would dig through in her attic for treasure...tying it to the soil, to the land gives a sense of home as well...
Soil is like a huge antique trunk...my friend, this is creative and strong. Great lines.
WOW! very creative.
Well written. Soil indeed deals with the dead far better than we do :)
Your words have the soul power ! They bubble with life & stir the soul ! Very meaningful thots & written with rhythm & flow !
creative write. such interesting thoughts have come from the topic of soil. nice.
C D,
Read 3 poems now. Misguided so rightly tells how we are the ones to be blamed for chaos created for the sake of own cults. Meditation rightly points our helplessness to focus on right issues. This one again is so factual.
Take care
PS : No visit for long time?
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