Thursday, November 17, 2011

errors ...



 

15 comments:

Rose said...

Outstanding! Your words are incredibly well matched to the image.
You have a great mind Moon :)

Berowne said...

Fine writing...

ayala said...

Someday, I would bury them under the apple tree
and take a turn after the next bend
and head towards the rising Sun....
just love these lines,my friend.

suvaiba said...

you know the title made me feel soooo anxious about the poem :)
its a beautiful poem almost like a story with multicolored emotions and phases along with errors..!
:)
amazing..!
tc

Carrie Burtt said...

I can so relate to this beautiful poem...the imagery is amazing!!

The Unknowngnome said...

Someday...

So many chances to error in choice heading to that sun.

You're shining fully on this one Moonie. :)

Morning said...

great magpie.

R.Ramakrishnan said...

Hi & Greetings. Chanced upon your blog. Poetry exquisitely expressed.Have a great week end !

lynnaima said...

Beautiful!!!

http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/down-the-line-in-plain-sight/

Brian Miller said...

i hope that some day comes...because i sense a lot more hope there...

Leo said...

Brilliant, and hopeful. A wonderful use of the Magpie image. Kudos! :)

Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

Bar None Publishing Group said...

Consider my soul nourished.
Cheers,
Mark Butkus
http://www.barnonegroup.com/2011/11/somehow-brought-up.html

JANU said...

Very positive.

Santhosh Kumar said...

Hi.. i'm very new to ur blog and even to the blog word.. ur post is very good.. u have compared the problem very nice..

The Gooseberry Garden said...

How are you today?

Happy end of November!

Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,

Hope to see you share today,

A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.

Your talent rocks.

Hope to see you in.

xoxox