Welcome to my world of dreams where imagination and reality, fancy and truth, laughter and tears move hand in hand. I will let you have a glimpse at the share of my own sky, sometimes sunshine bright, and sometimes with rainstorm.
I will take you to memories that are like a serene glow of moonlight, a whisper of mountain breeze, and a rushing gushing brook.
Someday, I would bury them under the apple tree and take a turn after the next bend and head towards the rising Sun.... just love these lines,my friend.
you know the title made me feel soooo anxious about the poem :) its a beautiful poem almost like a story with multicolored emotions and phases along with errors..! :) amazing..! tc
15 comments:
Outstanding! Your words are incredibly well matched to the image.
You have a great mind Moon :)
Fine writing...
Someday, I would bury them under the apple tree
and take a turn after the next bend
and head towards the rising Sun....
just love these lines,my friend.
you know the title made me feel soooo anxious about the poem :)
its a beautiful poem almost like a story with multicolored emotions and phases along with errors..!
:)
amazing..!
tc
I can so relate to this beautiful poem...the imagery is amazing!!
Someday...
So many chances to error in choice heading to that sun.
You're shining fully on this one Moonie. :)
great magpie.
Hi & Greetings. Chanced upon your blog. Poetry exquisitely expressed.Have a great week end !
Beautiful!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/down-the-line-in-plain-sight/
i hope that some day comes...because i sense a lot more hope there...
Brilliant, and hopeful. A wonderful use of the Magpie image. Kudos! :)
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Consider my soul nourished.
Cheers,
Mark Butkus
http://www.barnonegroup.com/2011/11/somehow-brought-up.html
Very positive.
Hi.. i'm very new to ur blog and even to the blog word.. ur post is very good.. u have compared the problem very nice..
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox
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