Welcome to my world of dreams where imagination and reality, fancy and truth, laughter and tears move hand in hand. I will let you have a glimpse at the share of my own sky, sometimes sunshine bright, and sometimes with rainstorm.
I will take you to memories that are like a serene glow of moonlight, a whisper of mountain breeze, and a rushing gushing brook.
yeyiee i am the 1st one to comment...!..!! mmmmm life for me i usualy come up with one statement-NO COMMENTS but i think you have the ability to decipher it and thats a wow quality it is amazing..! this piece of words tc suvaiba/!
Beautiful writing. The struggle to be born, then the trials. Or is the rain a blessing? Perspective is importaant. I love this poem. Gives the reader room to dwell and wonder. Nicely done!
My weekly offering: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/
Such a great poem and love your site so much your words flow and are amazing wonderfully written thank you so much http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/
Into every life a little rain must fall. It is nurture unless it is a climate-busting deluge like we seem to have lately worldwide. Evocative read! Thanks.
Hello Baishali. I hope you are well. This is a beautiful poem of life, despite the harsh environment and the gratitude for lifesaving water (upon second reading, the water might not be so welcome, especially if it's anything like the floods that we're having here on the East Coast USA). Excellent imagery too.
Always a pleasure to stop by here and immerse myself in your honeyed words, Baishali.
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yeyiee i am the 1st one to comment...!..!!
mmmmm life for me i usualy come up with one statement-NO COMMENTS
but i think you have the ability to decipher it and thats a wow quality
it is amazing..! this piece of words
tc
suvaiba/!
Lovely! I enjoyed following the progression of birth to appearance, then struggle.
beautiful!:)
love this...what an image of new life bursting forth...and the rain i am sure is a much needed refreshing
How in tune nature is! Lovely poem - when I see a great oak tree it is always hard to beleave that it was once just a little acorn.
Hi Baishali, Rob Kistner here. This is a piece well written, engaging – good work… mine is here: http://www.image-verse.com/clown
Oh yes, you have described life indeed. Nice job. Glad to see you at d'Verse
A 15 line treasure. The rain is longed for after a scorching. Keep humming!
a brave root...a sweet write :)
Beautiful writing. The struggle to be born, then the trials. Or is the rain a blessing? Perspective is importaant. I love this poem. Gives the reader room to dwell and wonder. Nicely done!
My weekly offering: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/
Such a great poem and love your site so much your words flow and are amazing wonderfully written thank you so much
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/
birth is beautiful in many levels.
well done!
this is lovely baishali.. standing tall under the rain and be nourished with lifes giving.. my entry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/
Ahhh, and it's an oak.
Birth and seeds sprouting are our 2 great miracles.
Beautiful words.
Into every life a little rain must fall. It is nurture unless it is a climate-busting deluge like we seem to have lately worldwide. Evocative read! Thanks.
glad you popped back in today...hope yours is wonderful...
Hello Baishali.
I hope you are well.
This is a beautiful poem of life, despite the harsh environment and the gratitude for lifesaving water (upon second reading, the water might not be so welcome, especially if it's anything like the floods that we're having here on the East Coast USA).
Excellent imagery too.
Always a pleasure to stop by here and immerse myself in your honeyed words, Baishali.
Thanks for sharing & for the visit too.
Under Blinking Stars
Beautifully written. Inspiring!
"And then it rains." Perfect ending to such a lively and vivid piece of poetry!
It's beautiful & uplifting!
Beautiful poem.
Well written and executed.
Great Job!
Just a beautiful word picture!! The ending is wonderful. (Will follow your blog and continue to return.)
This is wonderful! Nice work.
Melanie
Lovely piece of writing.
keep 'em coming!
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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com
Lovely! Life and the struggle to survive.
...the intensity of the struggle. the intricacies of the roots...the will to push forward and survive. the earth is barren...and then it rains.
beautifully done, moon! a picture of the wonder of life!
C D,
Fruits of efforts with persistent confidence told so emphatically.
Take care
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