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    Monday, January 30, 2012

    and the war continues ...

    She braved it all;
    dead bodies and arms strewn around,
    the burnt flesh, the scattered heart, the smell of blood,
    she braved it all
    fighting the war.
    In the slithering darkness of the night
    she stood firm
    her long limbs glistening with sweat and scream,
    stiff back and upright shoulders
    withstanding,
    sometimes taking shelter in a trench,
    warm like a mother’s lap that she long forgot
    sometimes hiding underneath the bushes
     safe as in the arms of a lover that she never had;
    valour hissing in her breath
    gallantry flying in her hair.

    The war is over.
    The male soldiers of her group enter her tent
    in celebration;
    they come upon her
    one by one and all together
    in a masculine excitement
    screaming victory,
    "the war has ended" - they shout in triumph.

    She is not part of the war anymore,
     the war lives in her now;
    And for her the war continues.


    http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2012/01/mag-102.html
    Posted by Celestial Dreamz

    23 comments:

    The Unknowngnome said...

    You suprised me with this. I was anticipating that the tent would be called Peace but it took the name Rape.

    January 30, 2012 at 3:13 PM
    Elvirah said...

    Beautifully written poem about the saga of a woman. True, for a woman war continues as long as she is brave to fight it.

    January 30, 2012 at 3:58 PM
    Brian Miller said...

    ugh...they come upon her, very dark...yes the war of their lives...visceral...stomach turning esp in light of my trip saturday to the holocaust museum...all too real for me right now...

    January 30, 2012 at 8:14 PM
    booguloo said...

    PTSD can be a life long companion. Here's hoping you find a way to cope.

    January 30, 2012 at 10:16 PM
    Kay said...

    wow that is some poem...strong angry words, as dark as blood...x

    January 30, 2012 at 10:19 PM
    Anonymous said...

    you can't choose to be part of a war or not, it chooses you

    iron mased fighter

    January 30, 2012 at 11:17 PM
    Susan Anderson said...

    That's about as disturbing as it gets.

    Powerful.

    January 31, 2012 at 1:13 AM
    ayala said...

    Strong and beautiful!

    January 31, 2012 at 3:00 AM
    Dulcina said...

    You said everything, all the horror she had to bear in her particular daily war, in such a delicate way... using tender words most of the time. Only these lines "The male soldiers of her group enter her tent in celebration;they come upon her one by one and all together in a masculine excitement screaming victory" show the real war inside her.
    Will we women win this war in the end...? Hope so!
    An excellent contribution for women's rights in the voice of a brave poetess.
    My favourite lines:
    warm like a mother’s lap that she long forgot
    sometimes hiding underneath the bushes
    safe as in the arms of a lover that she never had.

    Beautiful & touching, indeed.
    :)

    January 31, 2012 at 6:18 AM
    Trellissimo said...

    Far and away the best poem I have read on this Magpie.

    February 1, 2012 at 2:08 AM
    Rose said...

    You never fail to astound me dear Moon! I have been to read this poem several times since you have posted it and your talent just oozes - you have managed to weave the most tender phrases into a pretty awful senario making your last verse even more powerful.
    Bravo, bravo :D

    February 1, 2012 at 3:13 AM
    Brian Miller said...

    glad to see you at OLN...smiles.

    February 1, 2012 at 8:03 AM
    Doctor FTSE said...

    First rate work,moving and sad. I have not read many of this week's responses yet. I shall be surprised to find one better thought out and put together than this.

    February 1, 2012 at 2:35 PM
    Tashtoo said...

    Read more than one response to this prompt, but this is quite the write! Powerful pen, Poet!

    February 1, 2012 at 4:24 PM
    hyperCRYPTICal said...

    A chilling tale indeed that made me feel quite sad, yet the words needed to be written. Thank you.

    Anna :o]

    February 1, 2012 at 5:02 PM
    Mary said...

    A strong, brave, well written poem which shows another side of war!

    February 2, 2012 at 6:41 PM
    The Poet said...

    Hello Baishali.
    Been a while since I was last here, but I am never disappointed.
    So poignant & vivid.
    Very nicely expressed.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting.

    February 4, 2012 at 11:55 AM
    Ygraine said...

    The stuff of our worst nightmares.
    You have written this with such feeling, such honesty.
    Bravo!

    February 5, 2012 at 7:05 PM
    kolembo said...

    Wow. I didnt know what to think at first, where I was going, the words are so thick and furious and descriptive, I was ducking and diving and weaving through a market under attack...I was at war.

    Then I was a woman.

    I really like this piece, I'm going to read it again.

    Strong words, deadly intent, and yet there is life here.

    There is courage and strength and victory.

    I'll follow that woman.

    Thought you'd like to look at this:

    http://kolembo.wordpress.com/2011/02/07/keep-me-out-of-this-one-3/

    Good writing.

    February 7, 2012 at 7:04 PM
    Ramakrishnan said...

    Fantastic writing & powerful imagery. The last stanza was indeed stomach wrenching stuff but a stark reality in our despicable world. One of the best you have penned.

    February 12, 2012 at 5:54 PM
    Cynthia said...

    An intriguing prose piece. I like
    this woman who is powerful and victorious without being arogant.
    The repetition is a great touch,
    underlines the message.

    February 13, 2012 at 4:15 AM
    Rose said...

    Hey Moon, hope you had a lovefilled valentines day xxx :D

    February 15, 2012 at 1:58 AM
    ashok said...

    brilliant writing...you convey the emotions so well

    April 7, 2012 at 7:55 PM

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