Friday, June 24, 2011

illusion

posted for poetry pantry; Poets United.
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9 comments:

ayala said...

It's hard to escape our inner voices. Hope you have a good weekend. Nice poem!

Rose said...

Good piece Celest!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Powerful and insightful poem. Excellent.


Melanie

Brian Miller said...

the turn at the end of it being you is familiar but still a shock to the senses...we do tend to do that to ourselves...

Amiya chatterjee said...

SIT QUIETLY AND DO NOTHING....AND LET THE WORLD PASS BY .that would be a true solitude miss.
I would like to come to know you more.
There are ways .Let us explore.

bttrflyscar said...

compelling!!!

Jo Bryant said...

this was very surprising :)

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

The Search for peace and inner fulfillment is never ending.
awesome composition.

Eclipse said...

To explore the self is a life time work full of surprises :)...
...Beautifully expressed poem