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    Tuesday, March 5, 2013

    Envy ...

    Envy - the illogical emotion ... 
    written for - http://poetryjaam.blogspot.in/


    I swallowed down 

    the jaded green colored envy 

    that was tossed from under my door

    like a love letter, 

    and I wondered what’s so green about it!

    A dark dismal disturbing jealousy

    screamed out from a

     bleeding red and orange flame of pain 

    and I struggled to simmer it down

    swallow it down

    grin it down …


    if only I could have forgotten you,

    and if only love hadn't been a  fragile origami dragonfly,

    I would have heard the sober olive green whispers  

    I would have heard the enchanting secret of the magnificent forest green!

    If only … 

    Posted by Celestial Dreamz

    18 comments:

    Ramakrishnan said...

    Superb,sublime & meaningful.Yout new profile picture is awesome too !

    March 5, 2013 at 10:05 AM
    Peggy said...

    Thanks for posting on Poetry Jam! I hope you will return. It does seem funny that we associate envy with green now that you point it out. Nicely done.

    March 6, 2013 at 1:37 AM
    Rose said...

    I so admire your writing Moon, it always strikes a cord and your phrases are so beautiful from beginning to end. Fabulous:)

    March 6, 2013 at 3:20 AM
    Dark Knight said...

    Super poem, moon. This one has great metaphors and lots of meaning. Awesome!

    March 6, 2013 at 8:17 PM
    Mary said...

    You have expressed emotion so well in this poem. Envy and jealousy are indeed difficult to grin down. Sometimes it really does seem like love is fragile!

    March 7, 2013 at 11:17 PM
    Brian Miller said...

    f only love hadn't been a fragile origami dragonfly,
    I would have heard the sober olive green whispers


    really cool section and i like how you contrast the green of envy with teh green of life in the forest....

    March 8, 2013 at 12:55 AM
    adhi das said...

    u have expressed the poem superbly with a great poetic style..GOD<3U

    March 9, 2013 at 1:59 PM
    Jennifer Wagner said...

    Oh that is exactly how the pain of jealousy feels!

    March 10, 2013 at 1:03 AM
    Abin Chakraborty said...

    envy can be disturbing indeed.and does make us forget other beauties of life.

    March 10, 2013 at 3:07 PM
    Mario said...

    well written!! like it,,,

    March 10, 2013 at 8:07 PM
    Kimolisa said...

    gorgeous is the first word that came to mind. I love how you can paint such an ugly feeling in such beautiful words. I love this poem.

    March 10, 2013 at 9:08 PM
    Anonymous said...

    I love how you questioned a common idea then introduced your own color concept.

    This was my favorite part:

    "simmer it down swallow it down grin it down"

    March 11, 2013 at 12:42 AM
    Sherry Blue Sky said...

    "if only love hadnt been a fragile origami dragonfly".....yes, exactly! His loss, though!

    March 11, 2013 at 2:30 AM
    Anonymous said...

    Colourful, emotional depiction of envy!
    Here is my offering.
    http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com

    March 11, 2013 at 6:23 AM
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

    Beautifully expressed.

    March 11, 2013 at 2:13 PM
    Kodjo Deynoo said...

    Romantic and beautifully expressed with a hint of sadness

    March 12, 2013 at 1:33 PM
    TCPC said...

    Lovely play of words to see an emotion in a positive colour,,,perhaps an attemtpt to wriggle out of it!

    March 13, 2013 at 1:06 PM
    Vandana Sharma said...

    wonderful,,,loved the emotions...

    April 15, 2013 at 5:35 PM

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