Envy - the illogical emotion ...
written for - http://poetryjaam.blogspot.in/
written for - http://poetryjaam.blogspot.in/
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18 comments:
Superb,sublime & meaningful.Yout new profile picture is awesome too !
Thanks for posting on Poetry Jam! I hope you will return. It does seem funny that we associate envy with green now that you point it out. Nicely done.
I so admire your writing Moon, it always strikes a cord and your phrases are so beautiful from beginning to end. Fabulous:)
Super poem, moon. This one has great metaphors and lots of meaning. Awesome!
You have expressed emotion so well in this poem. Envy and jealousy are indeed difficult to grin down. Sometimes it really does seem like love is fragile!
f only love hadn't been a fragile origami dragonfly,
I would have heard the sober olive green whispers
really cool section and i like how you contrast the green of envy with teh green of life in the forest....
u have expressed the poem superbly with a great poetic style..GOD<3U
Oh that is exactly how the pain of jealousy feels!
envy can be disturbing indeed.and does make us forget other beauties of life.
well written!! like it,,,
gorgeous is the first word that came to mind. I love how you can paint such an ugly feeling in such beautiful words. I love this poem.
I love how you questioned a common idea then introduced your own color concept.
This was my favorite part:
"simmer it down swallow it down grin it down"
"if only love hadnt been a fragile origami dragonfly".....yes, exactly! His loss, though!
Colourful, emotional depiction of envy!
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Beautifully expressed.
Romantic and beautifully expressed with a hint of sadness
Lovely play of words to see an emotion in a positive colour,,,perhaps an attemtpt to wriggle out of it!
wonderful,,,loved the emotions...
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