You
stayed inside the house
guarding your peace.
But I had nothing to lose
So I came into the rain
and danced to the end of its alley.
guarding your peace.
But I had nothing to lose
So I came into the rain
and danced to the end of its alley.
Rain
I didn’t know earlier
that you could have wings
and that I can fly with you!
I didn’t know earlier
that you could have wings
and that I can fly with you!
Rain
cover my agonizing veins,
whisper me your secrets,
I will collect your words in my palm,
tell me that I am the lover you dreamt of!
Let me touch your toes
and play with your tendrils.
Tell me you have come to lick my sores.
Caress my insomniac moan with your fingertips,
go round around me,
run after me,
settle in me.
cover my agonizing veins,
whisper me your secrets,
I will collect your words in my palm,
tell me that I am the lover you dreamt of!
Let me touch your toes
and play with your tendrils.
Tell me you have come to lick my sores.
Caress my insomniac moan with your fingertips,
go round around me,
run after me,
settle in me.
Rain
Let me bear you a child.
I will surrender only to the Rain....
Let me bear you a child.
I will surrender only to the Rain....
18 comments:
I love it!
rain let me bear you a child...i love that...i love the rain...find its music soothing...and its touch cleansing...
So vibrant and sensual, fabulously exhilarating!
This is incredibly lovely.
I love it, dear friend.
May your surrender be realized.
Wow, very passionate and full of life's desire. I really loved this!
A deep feeling of connection with the rain...beautiful.
Gayle
How beautiful! It's nice to visit here for the first time and read such a lovely piece. Beauty in the pain of this... I love dancing to the end of the alley.
I liked the intensity of the mood and the sensuousness in the tone! This poem animates those rains that are potent enough to create and further life!
really nice use of the rain imagery, both as a visual aspect and in symbolism. Very nicely done. Thanks
Really nice, especially the build up to the great ending ;)
What a beautiful and sensuous poem on rain. Sheer magic Baishali !
The land here with me is in drought - I'd happily surrender to the rain too!
Came. Back to read it again, I love it!
Oh, this is beautiful! I feel the joy profoundly.
Truly beautiful - stunning words
I will surrender only to the rain...
loved the climax!!!
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