Monday, March 11, 2013

Relation ...

Written for http://magpietales.blogspot.co.uk/2013/03/mag-159.html

I am afraid of your scientific mind;
I am frightened
that if you give me finite answers
there would be no space
for hope
for daydreaming
for yearning
for longing
for my search of myself
in you ...
So let it be vague,
abstract,
like eternity
like an ocean; 
Do not try to find the imprints

of moments

of memories;

Let it be the whisper of the waves

amidst all other noise!


 
 

11 comments:

Poet Laundry said...

Amen! Beautiful.

Ladys Knight said...

and love can be that complicated
best to focus on the abstract/ the ethereal

nicely done

Tess Kincaid said...

Lovely write...

Rose said...

Breathtakingly beautiful Moon. Like the whisper of the waves :)

The Unknowngnome said...

Sigh...........

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Beautiful words.

Anna :o]

Ramakrishnan Ramanathan said...

Superb poem Baishali - simple but meaningful !

Dark Knight said...

Beautiful poem. As someone who approaches things in a very analytical way, I can totally relate to it.

deeps said...

deep and beautiful

Namrata said...

Love and scientific brains too hard to hard handle. I know it very well. :)Beautiful poem.

mindlovemisery said...

This is absolutely exquisite and I can really relate to this