Friday, August 26, 2011

passion...

18 comments:

Mary said...

So very vivid and sensual!!

The Unknowngnome said...

ooouuuu I like your hysteria!

"reptile alertness" so good!

:)

Brian Miller said...

smiles...very nice undertones to this... and nice visuals as well...

Old Raven said...

Ah ... I viewed this as Kundalini rising! I enjoyed your ability to show so many images with so few words.

Rose said...

The vivid imagery works well with the sensual undertones of this piece
you always deliver a delightful read.
beautiful, beautiful :)

ayala said...

I always love to read your words...very nice.

sajeevkmenon said...

nice passionate and vivid poetry:)

Heaven said...

I feel like it is about to uncoil and hiss....

vivid poem ~

Victoria said...

ooooh. This is amazing. Kundalini creativity.

suvaiba fatima ahmed said...

while i travelled through your poem and reached the last line
i actually had goosebumps..!!
well its true enough you dont need to write 3-4 pages to make it worth all you need is - some magical words.!
keep ryting
DASVADNAIYA.
suvaiba/...!

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Luke P said...

fine piece, enjoyed. Cheers

Luke @ WordSalad

antomaniax said...

Nice work,indeed.Keep up the good work.

thingy said...

Ooh, a very nice write. : )

leonargo.com said...

Chilling but provocative, excellent :)

Leo said...

Lovely images of a powerful sensuality in this :)

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Ed Pilolla said...

this made my spine shiver.

Jack said...

C D,

What passion does told so well.

Take care