Welcome to my world of dreams where imagination and reality, fancy and truth, laughter and tears move hand in hand. I will let you have a glimpse at the share of my own sky, sometimes sunshine bright, and sometimes with rainstorm.
I will take you to memories that are like a serene glow of moonlight, a whisper of mountain breeze, and a rushing gushing brook.
while i travelled through your poem and reached the last line i actually had goosebumps..!! well its true enough you dont need to write 3-4 pages to make it worth all you need is - some magical words.! keep ryting DASVADNAIYA. suvaiba/...!
17 comments:
So very vivid and sensual!!
ooouuuu I like your hysteria!
"reptile alertness" so good!
:)
smiles...very nice undertones to this... and nice visuals as well...
Ah ... I viewed this as Kundalini rising! I enjoyed your ability to show so many images with so few words.
The vivid imagery works well with the sensual undertones of this piece
you always deliver a delightful read.
beautiful, beautiful :)
I always love to read your words...very nice.
nice passionate and vivid poetry:)
I feel like it is about to uncoil and hiss....
vivid poem ~
ooooh. This is amazing. Kundalini creativity.
while i travelled through your poem and reached the last line
i actually had goosebumps..!!
well its true enough you dont need to write 3-4 pages to make it worth all you need is - some magical words.!
keep ryting
DASVADNAIYA.
suvaiba/...!
fine piece, enjoyed. Cheers
Luke @ WordSalad
Nice work,indeed.Keep up the good work.
Ooh, a very nice write. : )
Chilling but provocative, excellent :)
Lovely images of a powerful sensuality in this :)
My rally - Patiently Trying
this made my spine shiver.
C D,
What passion does told so well.
Take care
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