Monday, January 10, 2011

Death BY Dessert













 
an erratic rhyming attempt--- for Thursday poetry rally ....

17 comments:

The Unknowngnome said...

O "onion o onion"! It's such a sweet way to go but that's just my onion opinion. :-)

Hairyman said...

You got my mouth watering. Thank you so much for that!
The funny part is I'm not even a fan of sweets!!!
Awesome work!

Celestial Dreamz said...

:-) thanks a lot TUG and HM

scentofmyheart said...

Oh, delightfully delicious your writing. Yummy words and sentences, covered with the cream of talent! Great job!

Celestial Dreamz said...

@ scentofmyheart, thank you so much. keep visiting :-)

bendedspoon said...

I enjoyed reading this sweet yummy poem! :)

fiveloaf said...

you just made my mouth water.. here's my week 38 potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/

Rashmi said...

Delicious poem..You made my mouth water..I love sweets...

Jingle said...

you are so dear,
welcome to Poets Rally..

love your words, they are deep and moving.
powerful entry.
have fun!
:)

Iwrite4u said...

Yummy!That was a beautiful poem.Liked it!

Mike Patrick said...

A gastronomic delight, but I’m with Hairyman; not much of a sweets man. Still, you make them hard to resist.

Celestial Dreamz said...

bendedspoon, fiveloaf, rashmi, jingle, Iwrite4u, Mike Patrick, thank you all for finding the sweetness .... though my worry is more about the nonstop moaning about weight gain while slurping and swallowing every bit of it! incorrigible me :(

Butterflies of time said...

utterly butterly delicious! a delight to read and taste.

brainofbetty said...

I could not agree more. Uggh now I have a chocolate attack!

Chrissy said...

a mouth watering and tear jerking write all in one!

Celestial Dreamz said...

butterflies of time - thank you :)

brainofbetty - go for it dear ...you can always come back and repent later :P

Chrissy - thank you so much :)

Jingle said...

Greetings, Happy Firday! Blessings…

Friendship Awards, Enjoy!
Thanks for the support, You Rock!
xxx