Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Haiku


Solitude


Night has come again,

raked up wounds of solitude;

I pretend to live.

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Mother


Sacrificing blood,

chaste dawn and night's solace,

she bestows deep love.



note: written for - few miles - the haiku challenge

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9 comments:

subtlescribbler said...

awesome! both of them are deep and impacting.
i however, loved the second one on todays prompt more...very tangible and beautiful! :)

sarah

Sumit Sarkar said...

nice work...
love it :)

Mike Patrick said...

A new name in the Challenge, and what a powerful beginning. Beautiful.

Rose said...

Lovely haiku - beautiful in fact!

Jingle said...

hope you well..

skillful Haikus.

The Unknowngnome said...

"I pretend to live"

Now that's a thought!

You keep turning out great words.

Celestial Dreamz said...

^ thank you so much subtlescribbler, Sumit, Mike Patrik, Rose, Jingle and TUG :)

Someone is Special said...

Lovely Haiku.. Enjoyed reading this wonderful work.. Welcome to the challenge.. Have a great one..

Someone is Special

bendedspoon said...

I can feel the emotions...
Your writings are profound that I sometimes can't fathom it but no doubt it is obvious that you are a very great writer and poet. Always with feelings :)