Solitude
Night has come again,
raked up wounds of solitude;
I pretend to live.
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Mother
Sacrificing blood,
chaste dawn and night's solace,
she bestows deep love.
note: written for - few miles - the haiku challenge
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9 comments:
awesome! both of them are deep and impacting.
i however, loved the second one on todays prompt more...very tangible and beautiful! :)
sarah
nice work...
love it :)
A new name in the Challenge, and what a powerful beginning. Beautiful.
Lovely haiku - beautiful in fact!
hope you well..
skillful Haikus.
"I pretend to live"
Now that's a thought!
You keep turning out great words.
^ thank you so much subtlescribbler, Sumit, Mike Patrik, Rose, Jingle and TUG :)
Lovely Haiku.. Enjoyed reading this wonderful work.. Welcome to the challenge.. Have a great one..
Someone is Special
I can feel the emotions...
Your writings are profound that I sometimes can't fathom it but no doubt it is obvious that you are a very great writer and poet. Always with feelings :)
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