Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Spy hole

Posted for Haiku Heights

Searching for my peace
I peep through to see beyond;
found darkness of doubt.

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Doubt, you are removed
when I peep within myself;
hope and faith flash bright.

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Bright Sun glances through
spy hole of clouds from heaven
clearing fog of doubt

11 comments:

Hairyman said...

Excellent pieces of haiku! Very well portrayed!

The Unknowngnome said...

No doubt about it, it's very good.

Jingle said...

love the transformations and the different spy hole peeking.

smart entry.

Steve Isaak said...

Clever, theme progressive, impressive.

Celestial Dreamz said...

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Hairyman, TUG, Jingle, Steve Isaak :-)

Brian Miller said...

nice. i like the flow from thought to thought in this...nice progression...

Rose said...

Fabulous haiku. Very good flow.

Leo said...

I like the last one best :) It has a celestial feel to it..

Celestial Dreamz said...

Thanks a lot for being so kind Brian, Rose, Leo

Claudia said...

beautiful haikus - and always good when..hope and faith flash bright..

Celestial Dreamz said...

thank you Claudia. I am not good at this but all you guys' encouragement would make me try and improve.