Posted for Haiku Heights
Searching for my peace
I peep through to see beyond;
found darkness of doubt.
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Doubt, you are removed
when I peep within myself;
hope and faith flash bright.
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Bright Sun glances through
spy hole of clouds from heaven
clearing fog of doubt
11 comments:
Excellent pieces of haiku! Very well portrayed!
No doubt about it, it's very good.
love the transformations and the different spy hole peeking.
smart entry.
Clever, theme progressive, impressive.
Thank you very much for your kind comments, Hairyman, TUG, Jingle, Steve Isaak :-)
nice. i like the flow from thought to thought in this...nice progression...
Fabulous haiku. Very good flow.
I like the last one best :) It has a celestial feel to it..
Thanks a lot for being so kind Brian, Rose, Leo
beautiful haikus - and always good when..hope and faith flash bright..
thank you Claudia. I am not good at this but all you guys' encouragement would make me try and improve.
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