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    Monday, February 28, 2011

    The loyal friend ...


    knocked and hit,
    battered and bruised;
    flipped and flicked,
    hassled and hammered;
    he is the poet's true companion
    since time unknown
    and time captured.

    Puffy stiff and grey,
    dying to call it a day,
    yet withstanding the poet’s rage
    as he is stuck with a virgin page;
    the old, shabby type writer,
    still with him as a true cohort
    and a fighter.

    When the poet was young,
    he had let him climb on his shoulder
    and allowed him to play, tease
    and scribble.
    On the poet’s wedding day,
    he has produced the greatest love notes
    about a joyous cloud and a drizzle.

    often, with patience he has watched
    the poet's stare and dull despair,
    But now, no more with ease
    the fatigued keys would yield,
    as the words get wan and fractured;
    now, both tease each other about their
    receding hair line and vision blurred.

    Poor old machine,
    tried and trusted friend;
    time proceeds
    the poet, proud with
    advancement and technology's ascend;
    has no courage to face him,
    the type writer waits in an old attic.

    so for all the million words that are tapped
    a rhyme or two is better rapped
    in his memory of past frolic
    as in his lap lies the poet's life-lyrics.
    The poet should wake up at least once in separation
    for he fed his wife and children because his friend was in action.

    for - ONE STOP POETRY - picture prompt.
    Posted by Celestial Dreamz

    7 comments:

    The Unknowngnome said...

    A nice fast paced read as if reading it as it was being typed at 120 wpm.

    Poor typewriter, at least he has his older friends Pen and Pencil to rap with.

    February 28, 2011 at 4:41 PM
    Pranavam Ravikumar said...

    Very Good..! I enjoyed your lovely post.

    >>On the poet’s wedding day, he has produced the greatest love notesabout a joyous cloud and a drizzle.<<

    Nice part which I liked the most.

    February 28, 2011 at 5:33 PM
    emmett wheatfall said...

    Breathlessly beautiful. The right margin justification is brilliant. I think I know where you got that idea from. Again, breathlessly beautiful.

    February 28, 2011 at 10:22 PM
    dustus said...

    Quite the poetic journey that recounts the special bond between life experience and Poetry. Agree with Mr. Wheatfall.

    February 28, 2011 at 10:42 PM
    Steve Isaak said...

    Great flow, great word choices.

    March 1, 2011 at 2:32 AM
    Ifinder Ifindi said...

    Well. A great recollection of memories dedicated to a old companion. A symbol of love and affection dwels in. Lucky the TypeWriter to have participated in such a hearty friends life - Lyrics. Lucky to share. Thank You and with Best Wishes.

    March 1, 2011 at 11:31 AM
    Celestial Dreamz said...

    thank you TUG, pranavam ravikumar,emmettwheatfall,dustus, steve isaac, ifinder - I am indebted to you for your encouragement.

    March 1, 2011 at 7:01 PM

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