Monday, April 4, 2011

Essence





 





Wrote it for One stop Sunday picture prompt but by that time the linky widget expired! :((

15 comments:

The Unknowngnome said...

A beautiful opening and ending, certainly undying.

The whole thing is colorful and much too a tattoo to wear the old mask tomorrow. I think you are beginning to smile again. :)

One Stop missed a good one this week.

Umamaheswari.A said...

Lovely poem...well written

Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) said...

A nail on on a moment's thoughts and emotion.. Well-written..

Oh yes, Tuesday Thankfulness, my new meme is up so hope to see you.. :)

Butterflies of time said...

lovely poem.loved the spontaneity of thoughts and words here.

Brian Miller said...

mmm...i like this...i do hope though that she never has to clip those wings...fly on.

jinksy said...

I like the way the end is the beginning- it mimics the circle of life.

Rose said...

Brilliantly said as usual Celest. No need to clip the wings fly high and fly free! :)

Mama Zen said...

Gorgeous piece of writing!

liv2write2day said...

Oooooh. Beautiful visuals. Hold on to today!

lines n shades said...

this is wonderfully written :)

Nicole said...

this is beauty underneath a raw need.
lovely.

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ayala said...

Beautiful..wanting to capture the moment-now before it fades

Celestial Dreamz said...

thanks to each one of you for your encouragement.

JL Dodge said...

really like this !

Thanks for coming by, hope to see you again !
JL&B

Shauna said...

A gorgeously luxe poem with that
sweet thread of melancholy.