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    Saturday, April 9, 2011

    A quietude that speaks incoherent ....












    A pause
    like a forlorn deserted noon,
    a silence
    striving to balance tricky over a gorge,
    palpable,
    its echo resounding,
    weighing heavy on daily chores.

    A feel, so profound with a suppressed dream,
    a strange stillness reigns,
    waiting in deathlike calm,
    mute as desert, in a tensed apprehension
    for a bizarre rainstorm to surge.

    As if a long elapsed hope
    might start flapping its wings back and forth;
    as if the mind suddenly will get limbs
    and start its ballerina - maneuvers;

    Even the sky gets weary of an unleashed oomph
    of a quietitude that prevails,
    saying nonstop
    an wild bohemian song.
    Posted by Celestial Dreamz

    9 comments:

    Anonymous said...

    It reads like the quiet before a storm, hopefully a wonderful storm, a joyous one :)

    April 8, 2011 at 1:23 AM
    The Unknowngnome said...

    I agree with Ayala, this is beautiful, but could it be that it is not a storm at all to come but just a pending mist, a pending to set your mind to dance and sing as you have written here?

    Far from being incoherent your thoughts are penned to precision. This, to me, is one of your best writings.

    April 8, 2011 at 10:00 AM
    Celestial Dreamz said...

    :) thanks to all

    April 8, 2011 at 11:11 AM
    The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side) said...

    Just what I need at this point of time right now in my life... Can't tell if it is a storm.. since it isn't all like a storm.. I write about my 'struggles' now in my other blog, thehiddenting.com, very different from Tingtasy... and strangely, your poem, my, my state is exactly in the way you penned it.. :)

    April 8, 2011 at 1:18 PM
    Brian Miller said...

    lovley write...the ballerina movements got me...having a ballerina wife and even danced myself a bit...conceptually i like this as well...

    April 8, 2011 at 6:26 PM
    Rose said...

    There are so many lines in this piece that I love. It is very descriptive and I found myself reading it over a few times. The strange stillness is tangible. Very well written Celest!

    April 8, 2011 at 7:01 PM
    Jack Edwards Poetry said...

    Great poem. I like the use of simile.

    April 8, 2011 at 8:51 PM
    Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

    A very delightful piece of writing.
    I too expected that storm clouds were gathering........

    Eileen

    April 13, 2011 at 4:42 AM
    Anonymous said...

    elegant.


    Awards for you, thanks for the support!

    Bless your talent. Please join Poetry Potluck W31 today!

    Happy Sunday!

    Xox

    April 17, 2011 at 9:34 PM

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