How can I give you my thoughts?
For they are not mine anymore!
I let them linger on the jumbled lines of my poem,
I let them be with the autumn moon,
I let them float along the aching veins,
I let them befriend the morning mist.
they are washed ashore along with the lonely night.
Yet
when the dreams would be luminous,
when the arid desert
would be surprised by a heavy downpour,
a fragile sapling would take birth like a feeble hope,
on that day I would
secretly,
avoiding all eyes,
without anyone’s knowledge,
quietly,
place them on your quivering palm;
and on that day, sinking in your arms
my thoughts would learn to flow.
9 comments:
Wow, and that is all I can say about this piece you really did yourself proud with this one!!! Sigh....
Ah, what joy aflow!
Your poem..it set me thinking.. Yeah, thoughts, not mine anymore...
I love the expression used on a fragile sapling would take birth like a feeble hope.... that's just mystical in my eyes...
Beautiful words...
Absolutely beautiful.
Beautifully done :)
Take care
Marinela
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super lovely.
Awards for you, thanks for the support!
bless your day.
mmm...very nice...in the palm finding flow...i like that end...
oh Doc, this is exquisite, thought provoking, beautifully rendered verse! Both give beauty in themselves, I so preferred them together! A take to behold for sure! :)
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