Thursday, April 28, 2011

next time ...






10 comments:

Andy said...

Just beautiful. I love the depth of the ending.

Kim Nelson said...

Beautiful imagery. The tone was like floating along.

Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) said...

the longing and waiting I see in here.. Beautifully written as usual.. You create a vivid image with your words..

Rose said...

Breathtakingly beautiful my dear Celest, so romantic, love it!

ayala said...

I love this..so beautiful it really moved me!

Brian Miller said...

those memories revisit us every once in a while eh? i really like how you turned that in the last stanza...very nice...

emmettwheatfall.com said...

My kind of poetry. A wonderful write. Extremely poetic. Love this one a lot.

Reflections said...

Love the imagery you have created... leading to tender, yet subtle bittersweet feel.

Thanks also for stopping by.

The Unknowngnome said...

A beautiful sigh wrapped in a sari.

Butterflies of time said...

How lovely! Yearning to be a leaf knowing that it would be absent-mindedly brushed off,yet content for the happiness which those precious moments would bring!The closing lines are so poignant in their beauty!